C4k#8
My first comment for kids this month was on Mrs. Lombard's Awesome 7th Graders blog. I was assigned Levi’s blog, in which he described what he would do if he started his own business. His blog was well written and Levi went into detail about how his business would be an awesome restaurant. My comment for Levi is below.
Hi Levi!
I really enjoyed reading about what your business would be like. It sounds like a really cool place to go hangout with friends. Your writing skills are excellent. Great post!!
C4K#9
JHFI Class of 2015 - Londyn
Londyn’s post was called “Bucket List.” In this post she described where she sees herself 5 years from now, 10 years from now, and for life! Londyn wants to have new friends and be in a great relationship. She also wants to have a business and a “happy and good life.”
My comment for Londyn is below.
Hi Londyn! My name is Erika, and I’m a student at the University of South Alabama. I really enjoyed reading your bucket list. Those are great things to want to do in life! I’m sure you will get into a good college and have a business as long as you put in the effort and keep working towards your dreams. I hope you get to cross out all the things listed on your bucket list one day! Thanks for sharing!
-Erika Owen
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